IELTS writing II samples

      According to those travel business, the nature of average “holiday” is changing rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want to excitement on their holiday and are keen to participate in unsual  and challenging activities

                These days, there are so many ways to make holiday become exciting. Everyone tries to make that day with several activities to fresh their brain before coming to the work field back, exactly the worker men,colleges, or students at school.  Specifically, the way they choose it might be seeking a relaxing break place in far-away from house or  they might also try to fill their holiday with the challenging actions.

                To some extent I disagree to take holiday’s place far-away due to many obstacles that we will find there. Firstly, it spends a lot of charge start from buying the gassoline of car whether we go with your family by car or bus ticket. Then, go arround about the trips will make you have to pass any risks on the way go and back home. However, a lot of people do not get a new sense of refreshing unless they choose the new place instead.

                On the other hand, trying challenging action in holiday does not pay much cost and we do not need to go far away because we have to be creative to make us happy. Consequently, they have to think a good moment for family. For instance,  a working mother tries to make her husband and children happy with new cooking recipe, or  a father tries to ask the same officer to make football match near house, or  in other way  there might be colleagues  who are interested in hiking.

                To sum up I agree if we choose the near place to accomplish the holiday become usedful.

è In about 262 words

è  prediction of band score will exceed  5.5. ^_^